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Your story deserves to be powerful—at every point.

If you've ever written a scene that just \"exists\" and doesn't advance your plot, deepen a character, or create tension... you're not alone.

This guide gives you 30 proven, editor-approved fixes to revive slow, boring, or unclear scenes so your readers stay hooked.

Whether you're prepping for NaNoWriMo, revising a draft, or self-publishing, this PDF will help you:

Fix weak dialogue

Strengthen character motivation

Add tension to flat scenes

Clean up clunky transitions

Create emotional depth—even in action

Designed for busy writers.

Written by a certified line editor.

Start using it on your draft today!

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Your story deserves to be powerful—at every point.

If you've ever written a scene that just \"exists\" and doesn't advance your plot, deepen a character, or create tension... you're not alone.

This guide gives you 30 proven, editor-approved fixes to revive slow, boring, or unclear scenes so your readers stay hooked.

Whether you're prepping for NaNoWriMo, revising a draft, or self-publishing, this PDF will help you:

Fix weak dialogue

Strengthen character motivation

Add tension to flat scenes

Clean up clunky transitions

Create emotional depth—even in action

Designed for busy writers.

Written by a certified line editor.

Start using it on your draft today!

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Dorothy has been plagued by stories dancing in her head since before she could read. This began her obsession with writing, and she wrote her first full-length novel at age 15. Since then, she has gone on to publish over two dozen books filled with snappy dialogue, sparkling wit, headstrong women and the men who will do anything to earn their love. Her fourth novel, A Decade for Darius, was a nominee for '€œBest of the Best Reads of 2015'€� by Sweet '€˜N Sassy Bookaholics. As a devout animal lover, Dorothy is compelled to add pets into every story, rationalizing that if she can'€™t get a moment'€™s peace at home, neither should her characters! She shares her pre-Civil-War home with two loyal dogs, a passel of demanding cats, and the most tolerant and loving husband on the planet.

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